The plot’s second and third paragraphs seem really hard to parse. I’m hesitant to make any major changes without a bit more history with small changes, but there might be some adjusting that would make the plot points clearer? Happy to help out with ideas if they’re wanted :) Darkjian92 (talk) 12:41, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
No, as noted in the talk page for A Hero Sits Next Door/Notes/Trivia, leave old edits alone without a VERY good reason such as a misspelling. Buckimion (talk) 13:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
Thought I might bump this to clarify as well, as I was suggesting grammatical edits rather than a full rewrite of the plot for this episode, just because I found the sentences hard to follow even as a native English speaker. "The fame of Joe makes Peter jealous, and wants to be a hero too," stood out particularly. However, definitely happy to leave these ones if that would create unnecessary stress. I only happened to start a rewatch of FG recently and quite like proofreading and contributing to community sources like this, but I'm still feeling out the rules and expectations - hence the new talk pages. Definitely let me know if it's excessive, though. Darkjian92 (talk) 07:44, 31 August 2021 (UTC)